Comics

I thought the reading assignment on comics was just pointing out the obvious for the most part, except for the part about how simplicty attracts everyone.

Worshop drafts

A workshop draft of a paper should contain all the essential information and ideas that are necessary to back the main argument of the paper, yet it's grammar, and overall structure don't need to be perfect. It's purpose is to inform the audience of the paper's intentions, the audience usually being someone who will read the final draft and help decide where the paper is going. In a workshop I would tell the writer of the essay R that they are on the right track to a good essay. They just need to improve on structure.

Essay R

I thought this essay was kind of low on quality, it had a lot of errors such as repeated words, and grammar problems. Although, the author did have a lot of knowledge about wrestling, and showed it through all of the information he displayed. Yet, the essay as a whole lacked a variety of words, and suffered from the problems listed above. I'd give the essay a C.