Worshop drafts

A workshop draft of a paper should contain all the essential information and ideas that are necessary to back the main argument of the paper, yet it's grammar, and overall structure don't need to be perfect. It's purpose is to inform the audience of the paper's intentions, the audience usually being someone who will read the final draft and help decide where the paper is going. In a workshop I would tell the writer of the essay R that they are on the right track to a good essay. They just need to improve on structure.